Kia ora Caysey, My name in Zoe I am a Year 8 at Karoro School I like your poem about the colour blue. We have been making poems lately to. We made one about the ocean and another one about hermits. I like how you have included pictures of things that are blue, it is really cool. One thing you could fix is in the line “Picked blueberries of a blueberry tree” you could change of to off so it makes more sense. Next time you could try to make your poem rhyme. From Zoe
Kia ora Caysey,
ReplyDeleteMy name in Zoe I am a Year 8 at Karoro School
I like your poem about the colour blue. We have been making poems lately to. We made one about the ocean and another one about hermits. I like how you have included pictures of things that are blue, it is really cool. One thing you could fix is in the line “Picked blueberries of a blueberry tree” you could change of to off so it makes more sense. Next time you could try to make your poem rhyme.
From Zoe