This week we have been working on arguments.
We had to do an argument on recycling first and next we had to do an
argument on video gaming and whether we thing its harmful or harmless.
Once we had done that we had to write our own argument.
I wrote me argument on Zoos are harmful below.
We had to do an argument on recycling first and next we had to do an
argument on video gaming and whether we thing its harmful or harmless.
Once we had done that we had to write our own argument.
I wrote me argument on Zoos are harmful below.
Zoos are harmful.
Zoos are places where people put animals up for display.
They have zoos to show people animals that they might not be able to go
and see everyday. So they put them into a zoo so people can see them and
be safe. Sometimes zoos let you hold snakes,lizards,koala's and heaps more.
You can do to loads of different zoos like normal zoos, aquarium, zoos,
children's zoos, and heaps more. I believe zoos are harmful for the following
reasons.
They have zoos to show people animals that they might not be able to go
and see everyday. So they put them into a zoo so people can see them and
be safe. Sometimes zoos let you hold snakes,lizards,koala's and heaps more.
You can do to loads of different zoos like normal zoos, aquarium, zoos,
children's zoos, and heaps more. I believe zoos are harmful for the following
reasons.
Firstly zoos are harmful. Zoos can be harmful in many different ways some
zoos are not good in different countries they may hurt the animals which
is definitely bad for them. Other zoos keep animals in tight small places or
away from their other family. Animals need to be with their family so they
feel like they are at home. Other animals don't need to be with there family.
I think that they should not be kept in a small place because it could be
harmful.
zoos are not good in different countries they may hurt the animals which
is definitely bad for them. Other zoos keep animals in tight small places or
away from their other family. Animals need to be with their family so they
feel like they are at home. Other animals don't need to be with there family.
I think that they should not be kept in a small place because it could be
harmful.
Secondly zoos are like jail for animals. Zoos are like animal prison they
keep animals in a place where they are not free to live their normal life.
They are put into cages and then put into a place they cannot get out of
just like prisons. Even at some of the best zoos they are still kept in a cage
and cannot go free.
keep animals in a place where they are not free to live their normal life.
They are put into cages and then put into a place they cannot get out of
just like prisons. Even at some of the best zoos they are still kept in a cage
and cannot go free.
Lastly zoos can treat animals the breading machines. There are many
zoos that make animals breed like they are machines which is not fair
for the animals. If animals wanted to breed they would but people make
them and it is not fair. For example Animal Adventure Park treated April
the giraffe like a breeding machine. It's not fair for animals anywhere
around the world.
zoos that make animals breed like they are machines which is not fair
for the animals. If animals wanted to breed they would but people make
them and it is not fair. For example Animal Adventure Park treated April
the giraffe like a breeding machine. It's not fair for animals anywhere
around the world.
I strongly believe that zoos are bad for animals,as they are harmful,like jail,
and treat them like breeding machines. I hope you now realise the wrongs
about zoos.
and treat them like breeding machines. I hope you now realise the wrongs
about zoos.
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