Friday 18 October 2019

Persuasive Writing

This term we have been working on pervasive writing today I made a peace of persuasive wring about swimming here it is.

Swimming lessons should be compulsory for every child.


Swimming lessons are lessons that children and adults do to learn how to swim. They learn how to swim so for safety issues and people also swim to get better and better. People even swim to try and be world champions. All around the world people take swimming lessons to get them or their children better at swimming.

I strongly believe that swimming lessons should be compulsory for every child in the world. These are the reasons I think that they should make swimming lessons compulsory.

Firstly, water can kill.

Each day an estimate of about 10 people die from drowning, of those 10 people 2 of them are aged 14 or younger. I think that swimming lessons should be compulsory because if you learn how to swim at a young age there will be a lower chance of people dying. If there is a flood and the only way to get to safety is swimming your going to need to know how to swim right?

Secondly, you will feel more comfortable around any water.

If kids have compulsory swimming lessons they will not be able to make up excuses to not go swimming like most kids do around the world. They do this because they may not be bothered or don’t feel confident enough because they can’t swim well. They will feel much more confident and they will not be scared of water and be able to have fun with family and friends without the threat of drowning.

Lastly, the world with have less deaths.

If all kids started doing swimming lessons the world would have less deaths which would lead to better lives. I think that the world would be a much better place and would be much safer.

I strongly believe that swimming lessons should be compulsory for all kids around the world because water can kill,you'll feel much safer, and the world will have less deaths. I hope you now think that kids should have swimming lessons.

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