Friday 23 February 2018

Colour Poem

This Week And  Last Week We Have Been Working On Our Colour Poems This is My Colour Poem.
 I Did My Poem On The Colour Blue .

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Caysey,
    My name in Zoe I am a Year 8 at Karoro School
    I like your poem about the colour blue. We have been making poems lately to. We made one about the ocean and another one about hermits. I like how you have included pictures of things that are blue, it is really cool. One thing you could fix is in the line “Picked blueberries of a blueberry tree” you could change of to off so it makes more sense. Next time you could try to make your poem rhyme.
    From Zoe

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